1. ok mabey it if a little long…srry
2. I loved it, great work
3. its super long and I couldne finish it. sry
4. It was long but it was worth reading. Awesome job!
5. wow that was relly good and your brave for putting it online, some @ssholes are gonna make fun of it but I think its so sweet
6. I guess people that like science fiction would like this, but it is not my kind of thing. It is written well though. Good luck with it.
7. ok mabey it is a little long…srry
8. Ha. It's good. Grammar is off though. Guess that's what happens when it is a rough draft. Stop switching tenses for goodness' sake! : )

   in loving memory of Jack

9. its really long and good
10. nice but I tought u said SHORT
11. Logan for academic purposes that was good but other then tht I wouldn't read it. wht is the title by the way?
12. it was really good I especially like the part were the dogs attacked.

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